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Post  Cindy Tue Nov 22, 2011 5:31 pm

There's a typo in the AIO npc .
It's in the ETC section and scrolls is spelled 'srolls'
I'll try to find more typos.

and if there are anymore typos please post it under this topic Very Happy
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Post  Scottai Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:35 pm

On Christin's NPC (start npc) at the beginning;

"I'm" not "Im"
"couple(SPACE!!!!!)of"
"welcome newbie <3"." <- fullstop.
"It's <ign>". Not "Its".
"That's a pretty cool name". Not "Thats".
"I'm Christin". Not "Im".
"It's nice to meet you". Not "Its".
"I completely forgot!". Not "completly".
"boxes left, so would you" Sounds better with comma.

This is in order from the start of the conversation with Christin's NPC.
I know it's fussy, you don't have to change. That's just from my perspective. c:






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Post  Neko Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:41 pm

Scottai wrote:On Christin's NPC (start npc) at the beginning;

"I'm" not "Im"
"couple(SPACE!!!!!)of"
"welcome newbie <3"." <- fullstop.
"It's <ign>". Not "Its".
"That's a pretty cool name". Not "Thats".
"I'm Christin". Not "Im".
"It's nice to meet you". Not "Its".
"I completely forgot!". Not "completly".
"boxes left, so would you" Sounds better with comma.

This is in order from the start of the conversation with Christin's NPC.
I know it's fussy, you don't have to change. That's just from my perspective. c:






Lol, Scott.
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Post  Ambition -banned- Sat Nov 26, 2011 2:47 am

Scottai wrote:On Christin's NPC (start npc) at the beginning;

"I'm" not "Im"
"couple(SPACE!!!!!)of"
"welcome newbie <3"." <- fullstop.
"It's <ign>". Not "Its".
"That's a pretty cool name". Not "Thats".
"I'm Christin". Not "Im".
"It's nice to meet you". Not "Its".
"I completely forgot!". Not "completly".
"boxes left, so would you" Sounds better with comma.

This is in order from the start of the conversation with Christin's NPC.
I know it's fussy, you don't have to change. That's just from my perspective. c:





what a grammar nazi

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Post  MelissaXD Sat Nov 26, 2011 1:43 pm

wtf stop being a grammer whore!

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Post  iEATxPAPER Sat Nov 26, 2011 3:17 pm

LOL SCOTT ! *CLAPCLAPCLAP*
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Post  Ambition -banned- Sat Nov 26, 2011 6:43 pm

Pink wing bag needs to be Pink Wing Bag

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Post  King Kazma Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:24 pm

Scottai wrote:On Christin's NPC (start npc) at the beginning;

"I'm" not "Im"
"couple(SPACE!!!!!)of"
"welcome newbie <3"." <- fullstop.
"It's <ign>". Not "Its".
"That's a pretty cool name". Not "Thats".
"I'm Christin". Not "Im".
"It's nice to meet you". Not "Its".
"I completely forgot!". Not "completly".
"boxes left, so would you" Sounds better with comma.

This is in order from the start of the conversation with Christin's NPC.
I know it's fussy, you don't have to change. That's just from my perspective. c:





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Bravo Scott, bravo! fixing this could help make the server look more professional and like we put forth a lot of effort to create it rather than slapping a few lines of code together and calling it a finished NPC. On a side note anyone know a person with the last name Helsel or Barna?
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Post  MelissaXD Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:39 am

is there anytypos in this??
I went to the store n ate scott's dickie. ( it was verytiny) yes he was white i think and mexican. tbe end

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Post  King Kazma Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:11 pm

will you try and actually not post spam for once?
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Post  Ambition -banned- Sun Nov 27, 2011 2:28 pm

Voyeur wrote:will you try and actually not post spam for once?
My email is getting spammed by your posts too =.=;
OT morph exchanger thing. Leaf to leaves or whatever the plural form is

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