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Example of a denied application.
David Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:35 pm
Yes, I have seen Neko and Melissas threads, I just wanted to give it a try for myself.
Real name:
bobchan
Okay, you need to fix a few things with this answer. First, you need to capitalize your first name and last name, you also need a space between them. Also remember punctuation; don't forget your period.
Age:
19!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, it's hard to get incorrect stuff in a question like this, just one thing that people could mess up: overusing punctuation. It's okay to use an exclamation mark, just not more than 1 - 2 times.
Character name:
idk yet.. i no join yet.
Okay so, why would you make an application before you join? We don't even know if you're going to be a dedicated player. At this point there is nothing to judge from and you will most likely be denied. More things wrong with this answer: Don't use abbreviations, and remember to double check your grammar.
Time zone:
u go chek urself http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/
Why cant you go check? That just shows your lazy, also, if you don't know your own timezone, go check! It's not hard. Lastly, check your spelling and grammar, don't use abbreviations.
Approximately how long has it been since you joined the BedtimeStori community?
i already tell u... i no join yet
Grammar, Spelling, Abbreviations.
What is your MSN or email address in case I need to contact you?:
private chat me...................................... ok thx
Why dont you just post it there? Not everyone wants to waste their time private messaging you. If you don't know the person, I have a simple solution: don't accept. Also, as I mentioned above, don't overuse punctuation. Don't use abbreviations.
Why do you feel that you would be the best choice for us?
well...... i hav ben gm be4 and it was so fun...... i wan 2 be beter than every1!
Being a GM doesn't make you better than everyone, it shows that you are here to help the server. Being a GM is not for fun, although you can have fun on the job, you should know when to take your job seriously.
What qualifications/experience do you feel makes you the best choice for the spot?:
i alredy told u i hav been a gm be4! also i hav the name bob...... cooool name ppl wil lyk me.
Okay. I'm pretty sure you can see the problems with this. You think you're qualified because of your name? .. Okay.
Are you willing to play BedtimeStori for at least 6 non afk hrs per week?
I Can Play For A Long Time Because I Graduated And I Am Skipping College!!! But 6 days out of 7 i have work........ so i can play maybe 3 hours??????
Don't Talk Like This. It gets really annoying. Also, that answer was confusing.
Are you willing to do events on a daily and sometimes hourly basis depending on server needs?
Yes, I am.
Nothing wrong with the grammar or anything in this, but don't just answer with a 'yes'.
Have you read the rules and will you follow the rules at all times?
I have read the rules and have continuously been reading the over and over just in case they get editted or I forget a rule.
Perfect.
Do you agree that you won't give any items/mesos to anyone while you are a GM?:
no.. my friends deserve items.
No.. they really don't. What makes them better than other people? Okay, don't answer that, you'll say, "they're my friends".
How would you catch hackers?:
I will give them a warning, everyone deserves a second chance!
Okay, the second chance part is true, they do deserve a second chance. Not on the same character though, who knows what they could have hacked. You don't give hackers warnings, you take a screenshot and ban them.
What would you do if there was a fight going on between two Staff members?:
I will join the fight, I hate feeling left out.
You don't join it, you stop the fight. Whether you need another GMs help or not, your job is to try and stop it.
How would you handle two players fighting?:
I will ban them because I don't want to waste my time banning inconsiderate noobs.
Wait, what? Ban them for having a little argument? Even if your whole applications was amazing, if you had this answer you'd be.. gone? Also, don't use emoticons. It won't really harm your chances of getting GM, but when you're writing an application, you need to show you're serious.
Additional information about you:
plz hire me
After this application, I don't think so.
Okay, I have made better examples of these, but they were on different servers and had a different format towards them.
Real name:
bobchan
Okay, you need to fix a few things with this answer. First, you need to capitalize your first name and last name, you also need a space between them. Also remember punctuation; don't forget your period.
Age:
19!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, it's hard to get incorrect stuff in a question like this, just one thing that people could mess up: overusing punctuation. It's okay to use an exclamation mark, just not more than 1 - 2 times.
Character name:
idk yet.. i no join yet.
Okay so, why would you make an application before you join? We don't even know if you're going to be a dedicated player. At this point there is nothing to judge from and you will most likely be denied. More things wrong with this answer: Don't use abbreviations, and remember to double check your grammar.
Time zone:
u go chek urself http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/
Why cant you go check? That just shows your lazy, also, if you don't know your own timezone, go check! It's not hard. Lastly, check your spelling and grammar, don't use abbreviations.
Approximately how long has it been since you joined the BedtimeStori community?
i already tell u... i no join yet
Grammar, Spelling, Abbreviations.
What is your MSN or email address in case I need to contact you?:
private chat me...................................... ok thx
Why dont you just post it there? Not everyone wants to waste their time private messaging you. If you don't know the person, I have a simple solution: don't accept. Also, as I mentioned above, don't overuse punctuation. Don't use abbreviations.
Why do you feel that you would be the best choice for us?
well...... i hav ben gm be4 and it was so fun...... i wan 2 be beter than every1!
Being a GM doesn't make you better than everyone, it shows that you are here to help the server. Being a GM is not for fun, although you can have fun on the job, you should know when to take your job seriously.
What qualifications/experience do you feel makes you the best choice for the spot?:
i alredy told u i hav been a gm be4! also i hav the name bob...... cooool name ppl wil lyk me.
Okay. I'm pretty sure you can see the problems with this. You think you're qualified because of your name? .. Okay.
Are you willing to play BedtimeStori for at least 6 non afk hrs per week?
I Can Play For A Long Time Because I Graduated And I Am Skipping College!!! But 6 days out of 7 i have work........ so i can play maybe 3 hours??????
Don't Talk Like This. It gets really annoying. Also, that answer was confusing.
Are you willing to do events on a daily and sometimes hourly basis depending on server needs?
Yes, I am.
Nothing wrong with the grammar or anything in this, but don't just answer with a 'yes'.
Have you read the rules and will you follow the rules at all times?
I have read the rules and have continuously been reading the over and over just in case they get editted or I forget a rule.
Perfect.
Do you agree that you won't give any items/mesos to anyone while you are a GM?:
no.. my friends deserve items.
No.. they really don't. What makes them better than other people? Okay, don't answer that, you'll say, "they're my friends".
How would you catch hackers?:
I will give them a warning, everyone deserves a second chance!
Okay, the second chance part is true, they do deserve a second chance. Not on the same character though, who knows what they could have hacked. You don't give hackers warnings, you take a screenshot and ban them.
What would you do if there was a fight going on between two Staff members?:
I will join the fight, I hate feeling left out.
You don't join it, you stop the fight. Whether you need another GMs help or not, your job is to try and stop it.
How would you handle two players fighting?:
I will ban them because I don't want to waste my time banning inconsiderate noobs.
Wait, what? Ban them for having a little argument? Even if your whole applications was amazing, if you had this answer you'd be.. gone? Also, don't use emoticons. It won't really harm your chances of getting GM, but when you're writing an application, you need to show you're serious.
Additional information about you:
plz hire me
After this application, I don't think so.
Okay, I have made better examples of these, but they were on different servers and had a different format towards them.
David- Posts : 91
Join date : 2011-11-08
Age : 26
Location : In the pot of cookies at the end of a double rainbow.
Re: Example of a denied application.
Neko Tue Nov 22, 2011 12:15 am
your example is better than miiiinnneeeeeeeee . no fair, bro.
Neko- Posts : 160
Join date : 2011-11-08
Age : 25
Re: Example of a denied application.
David Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:27 pm
Naw. I've been doing this for awhile, pretty easy if you ask me. I like fixing errors o-o, even if people hate me for it. grammar - nazi.Neko wrote:your example is better than miiiinnneeeeeeeee . no fair, bro.
David- Posts : 91
Join date : 2011-11-08
Age : 26
Location : In the pot of cookies at the end of a double rainbow.
Re: Example of a denied application.
Neko Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:37 pm
David wrote:Naw. I've been doing this for awhile, pretty easy if you ask me. I like fixing errors o-o, even if people hate me for it. grammar - nazi.Neko wrote:your example is better than miiiinnneeeeeeeee . no fair, bro.
It's easy fixing others but it's hard to create a bad one.
Neko- Posts : 160
Join date : 2011-11-08
Age : 25
Ambition -banned-- Posts : 45
Join date : 2011-11-08
Age : 28
Location : Texas
Re: Example of a denied application.
King Kazma Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:29 pm
+1 for re-creating this one dude's resume i saw
King Kazma- Posts : 61
Join date : 2011-11-19
Age : 27
Location : OZ
Re: Example of a denied application.
Demon Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:40 pm
LOL Nice guide!
but i would recommend some more reasonable
answers. maybe someone should make a guide
on what possible answers to put in for the questions. C:
anywooo, thanks for posting this! it'll help some peeps.
but i would recommend some more reasonable
answers. maybe someone should make a guide
on what possible answers to put in for the questions. C:
anywooo, thanks for posting this! it'll help some peeps.
Demon- Posts : 84
Join date : 2011-11-08
Location : lost
Re: Example of a denied application.
Nude Tue Nov 29, 2011 2:46 am
What are you guys talkin abt? This app is legit.. and its what will get you the job. LOL! (:
Nude- Posts : 92
Join date : 2011-11-15
Age : 34
Location : The van parked in front of your house.
Re: Example of a denied application.
MelissaXD Tue Nov 29, 2011 11:57 pm
what u talkking about my app was not a fail watch christine fall in love with it
MelissaXD- Posts : 34
Join date : 2011-11-19
Age : 26
Location : In your bed
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